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This is a subreddit for people learning the Japanese language. A Place where I Hope you can feel welcome and learn something!!!
I think, therefore I am… stupid.

A place for well-constructed put-downs, comebacks, and counter-arguments.
Man’s Fictional response to comments about Alligator Auschwitz
Breaking News: Man Invents Fictional Scenario and then Gets Angry About it. Please read rules and disclaimer before posting, thanks!You’ve got to be fucking kidding me

A subreddit for chronicling how Advanced Capitalist Society is not only dystopic, but also incredibly boring.
Found this on insta lol figured id share here bc they’re good haha
Drivers who advertise intelligent or commendable views in a not very intelligent or commendable way.Religious nutjob commits suicide by words?

A place for well-constructed put-downs, comebacks, and counter-arguments.
Happy Pride to all of my favorite black magick trans people
A safe space for GSRM (Gender, Sexual, and Romantic Minority) folk to discuss their lives, issues, interests, and passions. LGBT is still a popular term used to discuss gender and sexual minorities, but all GSRM are welcome beyond lesbian, gay, bisexual, and transgender people who consent to participate in a safe space.That sounds like a 28% discrepancy to me.

A subreddit for those who want to end work, are curious about ending work, want to get the most out of a work-free life, want more information on anti-work ideas and want personal help with their own jobs/work-related struggles.
Do you want to ride ze Shoopuff?

A Place to Call Home - And discuss all things Final Fantasy, from the games, to the movies, to fanart and cosplay and beyond.
I guess I CAN tell the future
A subreddit for those who want to end work, are curious about ending work, want to get the most out of a work-free life, want more information on anti-work ideas and want personal help with their own jobs/work-related struggles.What educational choice is better in my scenario?
A place to discuss career options, to ask questions and give advice!Looking for advice on tough education choice for second time
A place to discuss career options, to ask questions and give advice!Need advice on tough education choice
CSCareerQuestions is a community for those who are in the process of entering or are already part of the computer science field. Our goal is to help navigate and share challenges of the industry and strategies to be successful .Friendly jobs and industries likely getting fired
Questions and discussions about, for, to, or from the Reddit transgender community. Open to anyone with a question.[PA] remote- has anyone in HR ever ended an unfair PIP, or had one stopped by HR?
A place for employees to ask questions about compensation, benefits, harassment, discrimination, legal, and ethical issues in the workplace.Shut up and take this guy’s money

A place for well-constructed put-downs, comebacks, and counter-arguments.