Wrote a little bit after a long break and would love some feedback.
Hello, fellow writers! Around a year and a half ago, I was working on a novel that I had spent quite a lot of time planning. However, because of a heavy workload from my school and pressure from my exams, I could not give enough time to writing, and eventually, I had to stop writing entirely. However, now that school is pretty much over, I decided to go back to my novel, but I struggled to capture the same voice and writing style I used before. To improve, I decided to write a few unrelated passages in the same writing style and try to capture its essence again. After a few discarded writes, this is something I felt satisfied with.
However, I'd appreciate some feedback and criticism on it since this novel was the first piece of prose I ever worked on (I used to write a ton of poetry though). Thank you so much!!
