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I want to apologize to those in my community that I offended. The intent was to write it from the perspective of those members of our society who do not understand us in terms that they would use. Posting it on a lgbt subreddit from that perspective can be seen as offensive. So I'm sorry.

This poem is a modification of the poem by Martin Niemöller and the Nazis. We should learn from our history.

I want to apologize to those in my community that I offended. The intent was to write it from the perspective of those members of our society who do not understand us in terms that they would use. Posting it on a lgbt subreddit from that perspective can be seen as offensive. So I'm sorry.

This poem is a modification of the poem by Martin Niemöller and the Nazis. We should learn from our history.