Thoughts on my cold email?

Hi {{firstName}},

I hope you don't mind, but I found your email online as I was looking to get in contact with {{companyName}}.

I'm the MD of (Business name), a Birmingham-based Web & Digital Design company that specialises in designing websites to maximise conversion rates and visitor numbers. We're experts in the Dental industry with a large majority of our clients operating here.

We’re currently offering free Website Consultation Reports to a handful of businesses in the Private Dental sector to (hopefully!) provide a reliable point of contact should you consider undertaking any online work in the future. 

Once again, it's completely free, so if this sounds like something you'd be interested in just let me know.

Thanks,

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