Review this cute story

I just woke up having one of this scenarios in my dream but I modified to tell a better story. Cringe ga untadi but it is what it is 😁. Too much ga untadi but emundi le.

Context: me and my wife (in mid 40s) are going to attend an event along with our teenage daughter. Logics emi konni chotla undadu, but I'll add more meaning and recreate this scene in a movie or irl. So future lo edaina movie lo ila chuste, know that it is me as the director.

"Aa makeup car lo kuda cheskovachu" I say to my wife as I fear that we might be running late for the event.

"10 mins lo aipotadi. I promise."

"Adem akkarle, mana kuthru already ready aipoindi, nuv inka car lo chesko, nenu already nee makeup kit pettesa bag lo. manam highway meeda chaala duram vellali, inka ekku".

Ala moham madchukuni mogudu maata vini car ekkutadi. Tanu car lo speed ga elite assala avvadu ani antu ekutadi.

Car ekkaka kontha duram highway lo elutu undaga, aa bag unna kit edo icha.

"Idi enti, na blush idi kaadu, idi mana kuthuru di"

"Adenti nanna, adi enduku techaav, adi amma vallu vadedi kaadu, na fav blush adi"

"Edo okati, malli kontan le nenu"

So now, both the girls are upset with me. My wife is sitting beside me (the driver's seat) and our daughter in the back.

Ala drive chestu, madhyalo road deggara sariga chuskole. Ala speed ga ellesariki, wifey make up lipstick raskuntu sudden ga face meeda slide aipotadi.

"Na makeup antha paadai poindi, chuskovadda. Anduke ilantidi avtadi ani, nenu appudu anna. Vinte ga"

"Adi assala kanapadale, sudden ga ochesindi"

"Maname daani deggariki vellam nanna, ipudu na blush kuda waste aipoindi"

Inka ala iddaru full one by one naa meeda fume avutu unnar.

Ala iddaru complain and gola continue chestu unte, ila kaadu ani nenu drive chestu pakkana oka Chettu deggara aapenu.

"Enduku aapev!" Both at same time

"Late aipotadi ani tega tinesaav, na makeup kuuda poindi, ippudu Enduku aapev?...."

I unbuckle my seat belt and bend towards her while remaining in my seat.

"Ento chepac.."

Then I kiss my wife right in front of daughter and slowly recline her seat to backwards by lifting that lever beside that seat making her seat flat while still remaining in my seat.

Ala complete ga vennaki ochaka, after kissing my wife, I kiss my daughter's forehead and then put her seat back to where it was by using that lever again.

I wear my seat belt again.

Complete silence now.

"Inka antha saripoindi ga?"

Any suggestions to improve are most welcome.