I’m disappointed with Caleb, his story…and MC

Infold…what’s going on in the writing room? You had the perfect opportunity to create the most angsty and dramatic reunion, to really let MC revel in her emotions and really let Caleb have a piece of her mind after making her believe she was an orphan again for almost a YEAR.

And then she just…doesn’t react? She’s just happy he’s alive and hugs him?? Like hello? MC is implied to be traumatized after the explosion (as anyone would be). Why isn’t she more distraught? More angry? It is extremely unrealistic that the first emotion she’d be feeling is joy after thinking she lost the only other family she’s had. FOR A YEAR. Where’s the shock?? The tears??

I’ve read fanfics with more substance than that. It’s like MC doesn’t get any character development and is just going along for the ride. Not to mention she just willingly moved in with him immediately…didn’t ask more questions…wasn’t suspicious, just accepted what he told her at face value. Like huh? This can’t be the same MC that attempted to shoot Sylus…

Now onto Caleb. Yandere trope, love it! What I don’t love is how dismissive, avoidant and condescending he comes across. He treats MC like a child almost?? It just didn’t sit well with me how he talks to her like her feelings are insignificant. And I LOVE the yandere trope, but Infold made him so unlikable that not even that is pulling me in anymore.

And overall the dynamic between the two of them feels off…like there’s a lot of telling us what’s happening between them but not showing. Genuinely finished it feeling like I don’t know Caleb any better than I did before besides the obvious fact that he’s obsessed with her.

These are just my opinions and thoughts!! If you loved it, good for you!! But I’ve found he’s not the guy for me and I will be sticking to the others sadly. I wanted to like him so bad but Infold sucks in the writing department sometimes.