Can you guys judge my accent? Non native english speaker here

Non native English speaker here, I came to the US when I was 14 and I learn English from mostly watching youtube videos and video games. Can you guys understand me when I'm reading this paragraph?

Link to my recording: https://voca.ro/18dK061ErG3J

“Please call Stella. Ask her to bring these things with her from the store: Six spoons of fresh snow peas, five thick slabs of blue cheese, and maybe a snack for her brother Bob. We also need a small plastic snake and a big toy frog for the kids. She can scoop these things into three red bags, and we will go meet her Wednesday at the train station.”