[1492] Thad Loves Katie (Not a love story, lol.)

Hi all, This is an excerpt from chapter 32 of my current WIP. Since this is later in the story I will try to provide some context. Jeremy is 17. He babysits for Roxanne, a 35 year old sex worker who is taking classes at a technical school. His friend Jarrett has been missing for two years by this point. Becca, Jarrett's girlfriend has been doing everything she can to raise money for a professional team to search the nearby wetlands where bodies are often dumped.

Also, this is set in 2004, so if some things seem dated, that's why.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sQWad1CCeKCXAqbLWIBx8C95eMbWgGZgvEImQYaBbqU/edit?usp=sharing

Critique: https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1iz11nw/1560_the_house_in_the_woods/mgn5thn/